The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above
map
illustrates certain areas in its past and after urbanization.
Overall
the area has undergone development in the field of transportation, infrastructure, accessibility, recreational facilities etc.
According to
the
map
, the area underwent a huge transition from rural to urban. In the year 1986,
besides
River Stroke there was Farmland and cattle rearing.
However
, Farmland was replaced with Houses in the present
map
. The gardens and a large house in the 1986
map
combined and developed into a Retirement home for senior citizens. Meanwhile, a primary school and a post office witnessed slight
modification
Fix the agreement mistake
modifications
show examples
from the past.
Furthermore
, shops are no more on the new
map
. The countryside depicted in the 1986
map
was expanded and reconstructed to meet population growth
as well as
the standard of living.
On the other hand
, there are some areas that remained unchanged
such
as bridges, the river stoke etc.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • residential buildings
  • commercial buildings
  • infrastructure
  • recreational facilities
  • population growth
  • living standards
  • green spaces
  • environmental concerns
  • transportation networks
  • connectivity
  • accessibility
  • economic development
  • land use
  • agricultural
  • vacant lots
  • developed properties
  • functionality
  • economic landscape
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