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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

#minutes #work #company #friend #•explain #jobs #•describe #job #•tell #news
Dear Mary, It’s been quite a long time since I
last
 heard from you. How are you doing? I hope all goes well with you. I have recently started
work
 in a new
company
. Today, I am writing to tell you about that. You know, I worked accountant in a Vietnam
company
, but I feel it
so
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 difficult for me and I often have to
work
 overtime.
According
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, I have little time for myself and my family.
Therefore
, I changed to
work
 as an accountant at another
company
. It’s a great idea for me because
this
 is a big
company
, the salary is stable, I rarely have to
work
 overtime, and the
work
 processes here are very professional. Luckily, the
company
 is organizing a tour
to
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 your city next weekend. Would it be great if we met? Well, I have to stop now. Hope you find
this
 useful. Keep in touch, please. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes,
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance readability.
complete response
You could add more details about your new job's responsibilities to give a clearer picture.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is warm and suitable for writing to a friend, which fulfills the task requirement.
greeting and closing
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which is appropriate and helps in forming a solid structure.
logical structure
The logical flow is smooth, making it easy to follow your explanations and updates.
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