The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.
The diagram depicts how
pineapples
are grown and processed into distinctive products.
In general, this
process involves both natural and artificial factors that can be divided into two main stages : the harvesting of pineapples
and the manufacturing of adequate pineapples
, ultimately turning into a type of drink, a canned food or even an export.
Firstly
, the pineapples
are grown in the field with the distance between two different pineapples
is
approximately 26cm, and in a climate that temperature fluctuates between 23 and 30 degrees Celcius. Within seven months, the Wrong verb form
being
pineapples
are sprayed with ethaline
, they Correct your spelling
ethylene
saline
subsequently
grow in five extra months until they are ready for harvesting. To harvest, the pineapples
have to meet the standard size and height which is about 2kg and 30 centimeter
high.
At the following stage of the process, the harvested Change to a plural noun
centimeters
pineapples
are rinsed thoroughly before they are graded according to
their sizes. Having been sorted, both small and medium size
Correct your spelling
medium-sized
pineapples
are removed their
tops and Change preposition
from their
are
peeled their grinds. Unnecessary verb
apply
While
the former pineapples
are put into an extractor in order to produce juice, the latter pineapples
are sliced into small pieces and then
canned. In reverse, the largest pineapples
are covered by a liquid called wax and placed in crates before being exported abroadSubmitted by dohuyhoang on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapples with synonyms.
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