The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.

The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.
The diagram depicts how
pineapples
are grown and processed into distinctive products. In general,
this
process involves both natural and artificial factors that can be divided into two main stages : the harvesting of
pineapples
and the manufacturing of adequate
pineapples
, ultimately turning into a type of drink, a canned food or even an export.
Firstly
, the
pineapples
are grown in the field with the distance between two different
pineapples
is
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approximately 26cm, and in a climate that temperature fluctuates between 23 and 30 degrees Celcius. Within seven months, the
pineapples
are sprayed with
ethaline
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ethylene
saline
, they
subsequently
grow in five extra months until they are ready for harvesting. To harvest, the
pineapples
have to meet the standard size and height which is about 2kg and 30
centimeter
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high. At the following stage of the process, the harvested
pineapples
are rinsed thoroughly before they are graded
according to
their sizes. Having been sorted, both small and
medium size
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pineapples
are removed
their
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tops and
are
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peeled their grinds.
While
the former
pineapples
are put into an extractor in order to produce juice, the latter
pineapples
are sliced into small pieces and
then
canned. In reverse, the largest
pineapples
are covered by a liquid called wax and placed in crates before being exported abroad
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapples with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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