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The chart below shows the number of films produced in five countries in three years.

The chart below shows the number of films produced in five countries in three years.
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The bar chart delineates the amount of
films
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 produced in 5 countries, over the period of 3 years, beginning in 2007. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is obvious that the figure
of
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movies
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 in 3 countries B,C and E experienced an upward trend,
while
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 A and D registered a downward trend. As the number of
films
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 in A was the highest, country E was the lowest. There was a slight going up in the number of
movies
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 produced by B from 2007 to 2008 (50
films
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 became 52
films
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), followed by a sharp increase to 70
movies
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 in 2009. The
films
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 produced by A stayed steady between 2007 and 2008 at approximately 87
programs
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, before falling gradually to 80
films
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 in 2009. In comparison with the figure of
films
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 made in C, which was a moderate rise from about 9
movies
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 to 17
movies
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 over the period of 3
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, the amount of
programs
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 in D grew gradually between 2007 and 2008 ( around 15
programs
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 became 9
programs
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) and after 1 year the number of
films
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 produced started to growth but not significant (grew to 13
films
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). There was a slow increase in the amount of
movies
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 in E between 2007 and 2009 (from around 9
movies
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 to 11
movies
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).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, movies, programs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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