The chart below shows the number of films produced in five countries in three years.

The chart below shows the number of films produced in five countries in three years.
The bar chart delineates the amount of
films
produced in 5 countries, over the period of 3 years, beginning in 2007. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is obvious that the figure
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movies
in 3 countries B,C and E experienced an upward trend,
while
A and D registered a downward trend. As the number of
films
in A was the highest, country E was the lowest. There was a slight going up in the number of
movies
produced by B from 2007 to 2008 (50
films
became 52
films
), followed by a sharp increase to 70
movies
in 2009. The
films
produced by A stayed steady between 2007 and 2008 at approximately 87
programs
, before falling gradually to 80
films
in 2009. In comparison with the figure of
films
made in C, which was a moderate rise from about 9
movies
to 17
movies
over the period of 3
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, the amount of
programs
in D grew gradually between 2007 and 2008 ( around 15
programs
became 9
programs
) and after 1 year the number of
films
produced started to growth but not significant (grew to 13
films
). There was a slow increase in the amount of
movies
in E between 2007 and 2009 (from around 9
movies
to 11
movies
).
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