The pie charts show the size of classes in primary schools in four states in Australia in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give information regarding the class
size
of primary schools in four different Australian
states in 2010.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that 21-25 students
is the most prevalent size
in most states, with the exception being South Australia
. In addition
, it is also
worth noting that classes
rarely exceed 30 students
.
With regard to New South Wales, the proportion of classes
within the 20 or lower student range constituted 26%, which was 10% lower than that of South Australia
. The percentage of classes
containing 21-25 students
, on the other hand
, represented 37% in New South Wales, whereas
South Australia
took up only 33%. A similar discrepancy could be seen in the 26-30 student size
, where New South Wales was 5% higher than its Southern counterpart. The remaining 4% of both states represented the classes
with over 30 students
.
As for the Australian
Capital Territory
and Western Australia
, the 21-25 student class size
took up the largest percentage, constituting 51% and 42% respectively. Furthermore
, one-tenth of the classes
in Australian
Capital Correct article usage
the Australian
territory
consisted of 26-30 students
, which was 17% lower than Western Australia
's. In terms of the classes
with fewer than 20 students
, 38% was the proportion in Australia
's Capital Territory
, whereas
Western Australia
had over a quarter of all classes
. The statistic relating to classes
with a minimum of 30 students
is just 5% in Western Australia
, which was 5 times higher than in the Australian
capital territory
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