The two maps below show road access to the hospital in 2007 and 2010.
The maps illustrate how the infrastructure around the city hospital changed from 2007 to 2010.
In 2007, to enter the city hospital two junctions needed to be passed. There were six bus stops allocated across Hospital
Road
, three on each side. Use synonyms
In addition
, the car park was for both the staff and the public and was located between the City Linking Words
Road
and the Ring Use synonyms
Road
, in the southeast.
In 2010, the access to the hospital had changed, Use synonyms
however
, all the roads remained. The junctions were replaced by roundabouts. The original parking area was replaced with a staff car park, Linking Words
as well as
a new public car park was added in the east of the hospital, from the Ring Linking Words
Road
. Bus stops were demolished, and a new bus station was built and allocated between the roundabouts in the southwest, before the Ring Use synonyms
Road
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, from 2007 to 2010 access to the hospital became safe, the parking area was extended and personalized, and Linking Words
public
transport location Correct article usage
the public
upgraded
.Add a missing verb
was upgraded
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