The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now and plans for its development.
The two maps illustrate the Southside shopping mall at present and how it will change in the future.
Overall
, the plan would undergo some changes to include different facilities. Linking Words
In addition
, it can be seen that the golf course and Linking Words
park
will make way for department store development Use synonyms
while
the car Linking Words
park
will get bigger.
Currently, there is an entertaining area, a noodle shop and a cinema in the northeast of the mall. The building Use synonyms
also
contains a cafe, a supermarket, a toilet and a department store. Linking Words
Additionally
, the shopping complex is surrounded by a car Linking Words
park
, a fitness centre and a green area.
In the future, the infrastructure towards the north swing will be converted into a beauty salon and other four stores. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the cafe is likely turned into an information office and some fashion stores will be added next to the supermarket. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the green space is planned to be demolished for new department store expansion. Another extension will be made to the car Linking Words
park
, Use synonyms
while
the fitness centre will no longer exist.Linking Words
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