The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now and plans for its development.

The maps show Southside, a shopping mall, as it is now and plans for its development.
The two maps illustrate the Southside shopping mall at present and how it will change in the future.
Overall
, the plan would undergo some changes to include different facilities.
In addition
, it can be seen that the golf course and
park
will make way for department store development
while
the car
park
will get bigger. Currently, there is an entertaining area, a noodle shop and a cinema in the northeast of the mall. The building
also
contains a cafe, a supermarket, a toilet and a department store.
Additionally
, the shopping complex is surrounded by a car
park
, a fitness centre and a green area. In the future, the infrastructure towards the north swing will be converted into a beauty salon and other four stores.
Moreover
, the cafe is likely turned into an information office and some fashion stores will be added next to the supermarket.
Furthermore
, the green space is planned to be demolished for new department store expansion. Another extension will be made to the car
park
,
while
the fitness centre will no longer exist.
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