The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. You should write at least 150 words.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The table gives information about how five European people lived in one another's places in 2011. In general, Poland had the highest population who emigrated to other nations
whereas
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Germany
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had the greatest amount of immigrated people from those countries.
To begin
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, about half of a million Polish moved to Britain, followed by another 426 thousand who chose to settle in
Germany
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.
Moreover
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,
Germany
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was an interesting place to stay
according to
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a few nations located in the south like Italians with exactly 556,000 and just above 110 thousand Spanish.
On the other hand
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, owning the same pattern as the Poland community, nearly 300,000 Germans emigrated to Britain,
while
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interestingly about three out of four British migrants settled in the southernmost part of Europe, Spain.
Therefore
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,
Germany
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and Britain were the most wanted destinations to be immigrated by more than a million European persons,
subsequently
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followed by Spain (about four-fifths of a million) and Italy (just under 200 thousand). Poland had the least immigrants with only 6,000 people, which was dominated by the Germans.
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