ou live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear sir or madam I am writing to inform you of my dissatisfaction

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my new

room

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in college, which I have to share with another person.

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new situation gives me some difficulties I cannot do my work perfectly anymore. My roommate is studying music and he is always doing some tasks related to it

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as practicing guitar all day. Other classmates always gather in our

room

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to have practical sessions or handle new projects they are involved with.

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it is a necessary task for him, he always

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noises by playing his instrument

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able to concentrate on my work .

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to tolerate their gathering because the

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is really small and we do not have enough space to have our separate individual privacy. I would prefer to have a private

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or at least share it with another master's degree student who is in the same condition as me. It definitely could help me to do my best for my final dissertation. I hope that you will address

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for me . Yours faithfully. Ostore hassani.