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The bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forcast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022.

The bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forcast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022.
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The bar chart illustrates the value of
seafood
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imports
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 in the USA from 2002 to 2022, with projections for 2032.
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, the pie chart shows the percentage distribution of US
seafood
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imports
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 by country in 2022.
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, the value of
seafood
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imports
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 in the US increased significantly from 2002 to 2022 and is projected to slightly decrease by 2032. In 2022, China was the largest contributor to US
seafood
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imports
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,
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 Ecuador contributed the least. In detail, the value of US
seafood
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imports
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 was just over 5
billion
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dollars
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 in 2002.
This
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 figure rose to 10
billion
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dollars
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 2012 and doubled to approximately 20
billion
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dollars
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 in 2022. It is projected to slightly decrease to just under 20
billion
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dollars
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 by 2032. Turning to the pie chart, in 2022, China accounted for the largest share of US
seafood
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imports
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 at 28%. Thailand and Canada followed, contributing around 23% and 16% respectively. The remaining countries each contributed just under 10% of the total
imports
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Vocabulary: Replace the words seafood, imports, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imports
  • exports
  • trade relations
  • forecast
  • consumption
  • depletion
  • local fish stocks
  • globalization
  • geographical distribution
  • dominance
  • biodiversity
  • trade agreements
  • proximity
  • economic impact
  • environmental concerns
  • overfishing
  • carbon footprint
  • logistics
  • market dynamics
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