IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 8.5

You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Write a letter to someone you know who lives there. In your letter - ask them for help in finding accommodation - tell them where you would like to live - tell them the type of place you are looking for. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rahul, I hope
this
 letter finds you In the pink of your health. I am writing
this
 letter to ask for your help with finding a house for me In your city. As you know I am working as a Senior Data Analyst at Krishna Infotech Gujarat.
In addition
, they are sending me to your New York City for work in their abroad office.
Due to
 that, I have to find suitable accommodation for myself.
Moreover
, I thought that If you could help me to find a good house for me. Let me explain to you what I am looking for in my stay, I would like to live In a quiet place. In fact, I would prefer to be near the lake which Is located northeast part of the city. To be very honest, I am looking for a one-bedroom apartment where I have my own bed and bathroom.
Additionally
, I need fully-furnished or semi-furnished rooms for better living. I look forward to receiving your reply. See you soon. Yours Lovingly Biren
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coherence
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adhieve task response
Make sure to use consistent verb tenses and avoid minor grammatical errors to help improve clarity and readability.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is warm and appropriate for the context, which is well-suited to the task.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph clearly addresses a specific point from the task prompt, making the letter organized and easy to follow.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • relocating, accommodation, housing
  • assistance, recommendations, suburbs
  • neighborhood, proximity, amenities, vibrant
  • studio, apartment, shared house, unfurnished
  • budget, preferences, survey, listings
  • grateful, anticipate, guidance, invaluable
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