The charts below gives information the sources of electricity in four countries from 2003 and 2008.

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The pie charts compare percentages of three electricity

recourses

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fossil

fuel

, hydropower and nuclear

power

India

Sweden

Morocco

and

Vietnam

between 2003 and 2008.

Overall

India

owns the highest amount of fossil

fuel

at 61.9%,

meanwhile

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Sweden

has the

least

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lowest

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percentage of it at 4%.

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Sweden

possesses the most

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nuclear

power

at 44%,

while

Morocco

and

Vietnam

do not even have it at all.

India

wields the most fossil

fuel

at 81.9%,

while

Sweden

has the least of it at only 4%, but the most nuclear

power

at 44%, meanwhile

India

has the least of

this

source at only 3.5%. The percentages of nuclear

power

Sweden

and hydropower in

Vietnam

are closely similar at 44% in

Sweden

and 43.7% in

Vietnam

Morocco

bears the most hydropower

comparing

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three countries at 95.5%,

while

India

has the

least

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lowest

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percentage

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at 14.6%.

Moreover

, percentages in

Sweden

and

Morocco

are

also

similar, but in fossil

fuel

at 4.5% in

Morocco

and 4% in

Sweden

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