You are going abroad on holiday and your friend will stay in your home while you are away. write a letter to your friend, in your letter : a. explain where you hide the keys b. describe what your friend needs to do in your absance c. say when you are coming back
I hope you are good healthy. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I will go out side
Correct your spelling
outside
from
my Change preposition
of
house
go
Fix the infinitive
to go
holiday
to go Change preposition
on holiday
to
outside. You may stay in my home to Remove the preposition
apply
leave
there until I come back.
Before you come to stay at my Correct your spelling
live
house
, I will tell you that I have locked all of my door
, if you want to open the door I put the keys beside Change to a plural noun
doors
rige
the wall. After you get the keys Correct your spelling
ride
so
you must stay at my home.
Correct word choice
apply
On the other hand
, i
have some Change the capitalization
I
works
in my home Fix the agreement mistake
work
to
you, Change preposition
for
for
Change preposition
to
do
the Wrong verb form
doing
assigment
like, you should Correct your spelling
assignment
cleaan
the living room and you must Correct your spelling
clean
to
disses the plate, Change preposition
apply
also
water the flower around environment
at my Add an article
the environment
house
. In
addition
you must take Add a comma
addition,
bath
Correct article usage
a bath
my
catChange preposition
with my
,
because I really miss Remove the comma
apply
the
animal.
Correct article usage
apply
furthere more
I will tell you that Correct your spelling
Furthermore
i
come back to my Change the capitalization
I
house
probably two
weeks again, and I still want to holiday Change preposition
in two
together with
may
big family.
thank you for your attention and your advice and I am looking forward to hearing you soon.
Your SIncerely
SAPARWADI.Correct your spelling
my
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suitable writing tone
Be sure to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter to keep it friendly but clear. Avoid repetitive phrases like 'go outside' and focus on clarity.
logical structure
Try to organize your thoughts more clearly. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, and make sure you use complete and accurate sentences.
logical structure
Consider rephrasing some sentences for better accuracy, e.g., 'I will be on holiday for two weeks.'
suitable writing tone
The letter has a polite tone which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
greeting and closing
You have structured your letter with an introduction and a conclusion, which provides clarity.
complete response
You have covered the main points required: hiding the keys, tasks for your friend, and your return date.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.