The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.

The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.
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The chart illustrates the majority of Asian
elephants
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were altered from 1994 to 2007.
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, India allocated the most number of
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,
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China having the minimum amount of
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animal is placed in the
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level of elephant population in Asia during 1997 and 2004. Comparatively, India and Myanmar by possession of roughly 10000 and 5500
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respectively, were assumed as the highest ranking in the population of
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in comparison to other countries.
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, Thailand was placed in the 3rd level with 3500 community of
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in 1997, but in 2004 had a considerable drop of about 2000 numbers.
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the population of
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in 1997 was steady about 3000 in Sri Lanka followed by Malaysia, they declined in 2004. The number of
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was constant in Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos, and China during the years 1997 and 2004 with approximately 1000 numbers of
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and they did not alter significantly.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words elephants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Population
  • Trend
  • Conservation
  • Endangered species
  • Ecosystem
  • Poaching
  • Sustainable
  • Wildlife
  • Habitat
  • Biodiversity
  • Endemic
  • Ecological balance
  • Fluctuate
  • Decline
  • Recovery
  • Preservation
  • Threats
  • Environmental impact
  • Human-wildlife conflict
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