IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line graph depicts how much
waste
Use synonyms
 was manufactured by Companies A,
B
Use synonyms
 and
C
Use synonyms
 over a 15-year timescale spanning from 2000 to 2015 Broadly,
waste
Use synonyms
 production in companies A and
B
Use synonyms
 exhibited consistent downward trajectories,
while
Linking Words
 that of
company
Use synonyms
C
Use synonyms
 witnessed completely opposite trends.
Company
Use synonyms
C
Use synonyms
, notably, was by far the most widespread
waste
Use synonyms
 output by the termination of the period From the outset in 2000, the number of
waste
Use synonyms
 produced by
Company
Use synonyms
 A held the lion’s share, accounting for 12
tonnes
Use synonyms
, which was about 4
tonnes
Use synonyms
 than that of
Company
Use synonyms
B
Use synonyms
. During the following 5 years, the figure for
Company
Use synonyms
 A lost momentum and decreased to about 11
tonnes
Use synonyms
, whilst
Company
Use synonyms
B
Use synonyms
 witnessed an upward trend to nearly 10
tonnes
Use synonyms
 in the year 2005.
Thereafter
Linking Words
, both experienced significant reduces, peaking at roughly 8
tonnes
Use synonyms
 and precisely 3
tonnes
Use synonyms
 respectively by the end of the period Commencing from 2000, approximately 4
tonnes
Use synonyms
 of
waste
Use synonyms
 production originated from
company
Use synonyms
C
Use synonyms
, hitting the lowest point in the chart, at which point the statistic for
Company
Use synonyms
C
Use synonyms
 rose to exactly 6
tonnes
Use synonyms
 in 2005, prior to reaching 10
tonnes
Use synonyms
 by the culmination of the surveyed duration

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, b, c, company, tonnes with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: