The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of

recycling

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recycled

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waste

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products in three different countries. The highest rate of underground

waste

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can be observed in the United

Kingdom

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while

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the opposite can be seen for

destroy

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destroying

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waste

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by fire. Underground was significantly greater than that of other categories in all countries. Underground accounted for

United

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the United

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Kingdom

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was recorded at 82%

while

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this

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figure was significantly decreased to 9% in Public of Korea. in Sweden, recycling was recorded at 55 per cent, which

this

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number halved in

Republic

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the Republic

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of Korea. a minority proportion can be found for destroying

waste

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by fire in

United

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the United

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Kingdom

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at 2%. Chemical treatment and Dumping at sea categories have the same amount which was 8% in

United

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the United

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Kingdom

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. the segments for

Sewden

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Sweden

and

Republic

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the Republic

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of Korea show that these two countries do not have a tendency to utilize chemical treatment and Dumping at sea. destroy

waste

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by fire was recorded at 9%

that

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and

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this

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figure doubles it in Sweden.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, kingdom with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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163 words

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