The chart and table give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at lea
The presented chart and table
gives
data about Correct subject-verb agreement
give
tourists
at a certainholyday
resort in Australia.
Correct your spelling
certain holiday
Overall
, it is clear that
in chart
there Add an article
the chart
was
more Asian and Change the verb form
were
Europian
Correct your spelling
European
tourists
than other region
Fix the agreement mistake
regions
tourists
.
Also
in Add an article
the table
a table
table
Add a comma
table,
it is clear that
more time stayed
there was Wrong verb form
was spent
Europian
Correct your spelling
European
tourits
, the most popular there was Camping or Caravan and the most popular Correct your spelling
tourists
activity
there was Sightseeing.
In accordance with chart
more people from Asia and Europe are was more than Correct article usage
the chart
USA
or other region tourist and Correct article usage
the USA
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
with
Change preposition
apply
almost
equal count that 37% and 35%, Add an article
an almost
the almost
while
count
of people from Add an article
the count
a count
USA
was 18% Correct article usage
the USA
from
all Change preposition
of
tourists
there was
. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, number of tourists
from other regions was 10%.
Furthermore
, in agreement with table
Asian Correct article usage
the table
tourists
was staing
Wrong verb form
stayed
in
averageCorrect your spelling
an
7
Change preposition
of 7
days
, most
popular Correct article usage
the most
accomodation
they Correct your spelling
accommodation
accommodations
was staying
in was Wrong verb form
stayed
5-star
hotel and Add an article
a 5-star
main
Correct article usage
the main
activity
they
were Correct pronoun usage
apply
doing
sightseeing. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, Europian
people Correct your spelling
European
in
average Change preposition
on
was staying
16 Wrong verb form
stayed
days
, prefered
to stay by camping or caravan rather than in Correct your spelling
preferred
5-star
hotel and Add an article
a 5-star
main
Correct pronoun usage
their main
activity
of
Change preposition
apply
them
was swimming or sunbathing. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Then
American tourists
in
average Change preposition
on
were
Verb problem
apply
staying
14 Wrong verb form
stayed
days
, was
Verb problem
apply
stayin
in 4-star Correct your spelling
staying
hotel
and Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
choose
sightseeing as Wrong verb form
chose
activity
. Meanwhile, Other Correct article usage
an activity
region
Replace the word
regional
tourists
was staying
Wrong verb form
stayed
in
10 Change preposition
for
days
also
prefered
to Correct your spelling
preferred
camping
or caravan and Replace the word
camp
Correct your spelling
choose
choosed
to surfCorrect your spelling
chose
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