The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
The charts compare the main methods of transportation for
people
travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
Overall
, while
in 2004 people
were mostly transported by car , however
in 2009 people
were mostly transported by bus.
In 2004 more people
were transported by car by 51 proportion. At least they had used by train at 3 percentage. 33 proportion people
were transported by bus in 2004. Afterwards, the high figure shows 9 per cent of bicycles which people
utilized . Less
Change the quantifier
Fewer
people
are transported by walking for travel to university work or other. Regarding , in 2009 the high figure compared to 46 per cent of buses which people
transported. The lowest percentage is 4 people
used by the train . Some people
transported by car at 28 per cent. In 2004 16 proportion of bicycles which humans transported . Fewer people
utilized walking at 6 percentage
.Replace the word
per cent
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