Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of the violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Dicuss both view

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that movies shown on television or in theatres which contain ferocity should be controlled by the government

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an alternative point of view is that the

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should be kept intact.

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essay agrees with the previous statement and lays out the responses below There can be no doubt that almost the majority of viewers nowadays are teenagers. For that reason, the appeasement of

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violent

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with too many abusive

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has a profound effect on mental faculty.

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have an effect on not only the young but

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the adults.

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content leads to an increase in criminal crime. The fact that

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who watch abusive

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frequently think that using guns or knives is normal and easy to break the law.

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in violent

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certain that

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will never have abusive behaviour An alternative viewpoint of

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still support the development of

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with high excitement.

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watch

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films

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as a way to relax. They feel engaged with violent

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content is controlled by the government. For that reason, many argue that

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and to ensure that they will earn enough profit, abusive features are necessary.

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may be true but watching too many violent

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and behaviours is always a potential danger with the thoughts and manner of

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that the limit of age for

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or horror movies is not a good solution. What I mean is many cinemas lack responsibility for age control

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many teenagers who are not old enough can watch movies with high levels of

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.

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, limiting the

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of

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in these

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is always a necessary solution to certain the development of the country In conclusion, despite the contributions of

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to the economy of the country, they are

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a risk to children and the development of the country. The government should reduce the

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of

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in

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films

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