The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts

describes

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the

sources

of electricity in 4 countries (

India

Sweden

Morocco

,Vietnam ). For 5 years , from 2003 until 2005 . In the next

paragraphs

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will

furher

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further

elaborate

the

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on the

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specific data regarding

this

chart .

Overall

, the chart illustrates

tha

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that

the

Sweden

and

India

have three

sources

power

which are fossil fuel ,

hydro

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hydropower

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power

, and nuclear

power

While

Morocco

and

Veitnam

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Vietnam

have only two kinds of electricity which are fossil

feul

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fuel

fuels

and

hydro

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hydropower

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power

Firstly

, when examining

India

and

Sweden

India

's major

precentage

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percentage

of fuel

compines

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companies

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fossil

fuel

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fuels

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which is about 80% of the entire

sources

of electricity , as

oppossed

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opposed

Sweden

that

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which

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has

the

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minimum percentage which is about 2% .

Secondly

Morocco

and

Veitnam

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Vietnam

had only two

sources

power

which are fossil

feul

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fuel

fuels

and

hydro

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hydropower

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power

Morocco's

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Morocco

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mainly depends on

hydro

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hydropower

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power

, which represents 90 % of the total usage .

While

Vietnam

compined

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combined

the usage of the two powers

specificly

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specifically

used 60 % and 40% respectively.

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