The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the

sources

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of electricity in 4 countries (

India

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Sweden

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Morocco

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,Vietnam ). For 5 years , from 2003 until 2005 . In the next

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will

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specific data regarding

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chart .

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, the chart illustrates

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that

the

Sweden

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and

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have three

sources

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power

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which are fossil fuel ,

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hydro

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hydropower

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power

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, and nuclear

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Morocco

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and

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have only two kinds of electricity which are fossil

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fuel

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hydro

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power

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, when examining

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and

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's major

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percentage

of fuel

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companies

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fossil

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which is about 80% of the entire

sources

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of electricity , as

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opposed

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that

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minimum percentage which is about 2% .

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Morocco

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and

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had only two

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power

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which are fossil

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fuel

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hydro

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hydropower

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power

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Morocco's

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mainly depends on

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hydro

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power

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, which represents 90 % of the total usage .

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compined

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combined

the usage of the two powers

specificly

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specifically

used 60 % and 40% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, india, sweden, morocco, power, hydro with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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