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The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts how
people
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 react to
celebrity
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news
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coverage
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.
Overall
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, it is obvious that higher percentages of readers think that famous
people
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 get too much
news
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coverage
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 and TV
news
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 provides the highest ratio of
celebrity
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news
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.
According to
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 the provided data, 85% of
people
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 believe that celebrities get more
news
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coverage
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 than they deserve. Only 7 of
such
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news
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 followers say that the
coverage
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 happens at the right amount
while
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 almost a similar percentage of viewers deem the
coverage
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 is not enough. In terms of
celebrity
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news
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coverage
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 responsibilities, more than half of the audience
believe
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believes
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 that
news
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 organisations are responsible for that. Around one-third of them say the
people
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 are responsible for it and only 7% of the state that both the
news
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 and public are responsible.
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, 60% of respondents said that TV
news
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 gave
celebrity
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 updates
while
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 15% of them pointed out
the
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that the
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 Internet and websites make the
coverage
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.
According to
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 12% of survey takers, newspapers spread the
celebrity
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news
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 and 5% of them indicated radio to the media to do
this
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, celebrity, news, coverage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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