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The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts how
people
 react to
celebrity
news
coverage
.
Overall
, it is obvious that higher percentages of readers think that famous
people
 get too much
news
coverage
 and TV
news
 provides the highest ratio of
celebrity
news
.
According to
 the provided data, 85% of
people
 believe that celebrities get more
news
coverage
 than they deserve. Only 7 of
such
news
 followers say that the
coverage
 happens at the right amount
while
 almost a similar percentage of viewers deem the
coverage
 is not enough. In terms of
celebrity
news
coverage
 responsibilities, more than half of the audience
believe
Correct subject-verb agreement
believes
show examples
 that
news
 organisations are responsible for that. Around one-third of them say the
people
 are responsible for it and only 7% of the state that both the
news
 and public are responsible.
Finally
, 60% of respondents said that TV
news
 gave
celebrity
 updates
while
 15% of them pointed out
the
Correct word choice
that the
show examples
 Internet and websites make the
coverage
.
According to
 12% of survey takers, newspapers spread the
celebrity
news
 and 5% of them indicated radio to the media to do
this
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, celebrity, news, coverage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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