You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of people who visited three different museums in London from 2007 to 2012.
Overall
, the
number
of visitors to the National Gallery tended to increase
whereas
that of visitors to the Victoria and Albert
Museum
was more likely to drop throughout the examined periods.
Although
the
number
of people who visited the British
Museum
declined it seemed to recover. Starting with the graphs for the National Gallery and the British
Museum
,
they
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tended to follow a similar pattern
for
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most of the time.
In other words
, they both increased their popularity regardless of the fact that the latter experienced a huge drop from roughly 12
million
in 2007 to slightly above 5
million
in 2008.
Furthermore
, it kept rising consistently and increased dramatically in 2011 and 2012 with 12
million
and just below 15
million
respectively.
In contrast
, the National Gallery started with the lowest at about 7
million
in 2007, after which it showed an upward trend until 2012 when it reached its highest at more than 15
million
. Turning to the graph for the Victoria and Albert
Museum
, it generally tended to lose its popularity. Even though it had the largest
number
of visitors from 2007 to 2009, the
number
significantly declined from approximately 13
million
to 8
million
respectively. After it hit the bottom at just above 5
million
in 2010, it started to rise by 2012 when it reached 10
million
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, museum, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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