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The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
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 of people who visited three different museums in London from 2007 to 2012.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of visitors to the National Gallery tended to increase
whereas
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 that of visitors to the Victoria and Albert
Museum
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 was more likely to drop throughout the examined periods.
Although
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 the
number
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 of people who visited the British
Museum
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 declined it seemed to recover. Starting with the graphs for the National Gallery and the British
Museum
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,
they
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apply
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tended to follow a similar pattern
for
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most of the time.
In other words
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, they both increased their popularity regardless of the fact that the latter experienced a huge drop from roughly 12
million
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 in 2007 to slightly above 5
million
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 in 2008.
Furthermore
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, it kept rising consistently and increased dramatically in 2011 and 2012 with 12
million
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 and just below 15
million
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 respectively.
In contrast
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, the National Gallery started with the lowest at about 7
million
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 in 2007, after which it showed an upward trend until 2012 when it reached its highest at more than 15
million
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. Turning to the graph for the Victoria and Albert
Museum
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, it generally tended to lose its popularity. Even though it had the largest
number
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 of visitors from 2007 to 2009, the
number
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 significantly declined from approximately 13
million
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 to 8
million
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 respectively. After it hit the bottom at just above 5
million
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 in 2010, it started to rise by 2012 when it reached 10
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, museum, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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