The map shows bookstor in 200 and now
The diagram displays some changes to the bookstore in 2000 and the present that have been improved for readers.
Overall
, the place has undergone significant changes to make it attractive for reading. To illustrate, several modifications can be seen in the present bookstore. The most essential development is that there is a reading area in which the shopper can read books in-store.
As you can see, some sections, such
as travel, new books, and service areas, remained in the same places from 2000 until now. On the other hand
, some new things have been added, including a place to sit in the shop's center
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centre
Moreover
, a coffee corner has been added, which you can enjoy when you read.
Furthermore
, there are some rearrangements to facilities. The fiction novel area has been downsized and replaced with art, hobbies, and cooking shelves. In addition
, the non-fiction books have been transferred to the left corner of the store.Submitted by btool.taher on
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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