The table provides information about the projected costings for sustainable forestry in West Africa, Central America and South-east Asia within the next 5 years, while pie chart indicates spendings of the projects for the first year.

The table provides information about the projected costings for sustainable forestry in West Africa, Central America and South-east Asia within the next 5 years, while pie chart indicates spendings of the projects for the first year.
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The table forecasts the amount of
money
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measured in US dollars which will be used for the next five
years
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for maintaining the forest. Yet, the pie chart shows the expenditures to spend in 4 different areas in
year
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one. When considered together, there is no correlation between the
two
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sets of data. The table indicates that West Africa allocates $10.5
million
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in the first
year
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, the number
then
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decreases by around a quarter the
year
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after and drops to just $2,5
million
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the next
two
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years
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but it increases by a
million
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at the end
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of the projected
year
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. Central America starts at $20
million
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and it plunges by almost 50% in
year
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two
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before dropping to $5
million
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respectively for the next three consecutive
years
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. Southeast Asia spends $30
million
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at first. the amount drops by a third in the second
year
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yet it doubles in
year
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three and ends at $50
million
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in the
last
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two
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years
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. The pie chart shows that in the first
year
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, the major expense is on salaries, accounting for 50%, followed by training which takes a third of the
money
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allocated. Only 10% of the
money
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will be used for not only training but
also
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office. In conclusion, in five
years
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, the amount of
money
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which will be used for environmental recovery
decreases
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will decrease
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for West Africa and Central America.
In contrast
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, Southeast Asia prepares more
money
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in
year
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five. Meanwhile, the data in the other chart shows that half of the
money
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is
prepared
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spent
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for
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on
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salaries. Costs
ranks
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rank
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second,
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while
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office and training employees need the least
money
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, years, year, two, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
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