The table provides information about the projected costings for sustainable forestry in West Africa, Central America and South-east Asia within the next 5 years, while pie chart indicates spendings of the projects for the first year.
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The table forecasts the amount of
money
measured in US dollars which will be used for the next five years
for maintaining the forest. Yet, the pie chart shows the expenditures to spend in 4 different areas in year
one. When considered together, there is no correlation between the two
sets of data.
The table indicates that West Africa allocates $10.5 million
in the first year
, the number then
decreases by around a quarter the year
after and drops to just $2,5 million
the next two
years
but it increases by a million
at the end
of the projected year
. Central America starts at $20 million
and it plunges by almost 50% in year
two
before dropping to $5 million
respectively for the next three consecutive years
. Southeast Asia spends $30 million
at first. the amount drops by a third in the second year
yet it doubles in year
three and ends at $50 million
in the last
two
years
.
The pie chart shows that in the first year
, the major expense is on salaries, accounting for 50%, followed by training which takes a third of the money
allocated. Only 10% of the money
will be used for not only training but also
office.
In conclusion, in five years
, the amount of money
which will be used for environmental recovery decreases
for West Africa and Central America. Wrong verb form
will decrease
In contrast
, Southeast Asia prepares more money
in year
five. Meanwhile, the data in the other chart shows that half of the money
is prepared
Verb problem
spent
for
salaries. Costs Change preposition
on
ranks
Change the verb form
rank
second,
while
office and training employees need the least money
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, years, year, two, million with synonyms.
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