The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph is a figure revealing data about the change in the
population
among four countries
with Asian nationality who were living in the cities from 1970 to 2020. Also
,it estimates the changes that will happen between 2030 and 2040.
Overall
increasing trends can be seen in the percentage of the urban inhabitants from 1970 to 2020 in all these countries
. Furthermore
, increasing trends in the number of urban inhabitants will continue until 2040.
It can be clearly seen that all countries
have growing trends from 1970 to 2019. Afterwards, the population
of Filipinos
urban inhabitants had a fall from 50 Replace the word
Filipino
percent
in 1990 to almost 40 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2010,followed by Change the spelling
per cent
gradual
raising to about 55 Correct article usage
a gradual
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
until
2040 . Meanwhile, the percentage of the urban Change preposition
by
population
in Malaysia ,Thailand and Indonesia has increased by about 30%,3%and 20 % respectively from 2010 until 2020 .
Similarly
, this
increasing trend will continue until 2040. Malaysia with a sharp rise will become the first asian
country in urban area Change the capitalization
Asian
population
then
Indonesia and the Philippines will recognize
as the second and third populated Wrong verb form
be recognised
countries
respectively. and Thailand's population
after its nearly unchangeable trend from 1990 to 2020 will grow gradually to about 50% of the total population
in 2040.Submitted by ashkanasho on
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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