The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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worldwide is a good trend, whilst others believe it is a negative. Inexpensive Use synonyms
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to explore different nations and expand their social network. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the excessive number of travellers might cause to enlargement of litter in any corner of the country, contributing to the destruction of nature.
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to say, the Linking Words
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Also
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abroad, exploring cultures. Use synonyms
For instance
, the Aviasales, airline company provides as many cheap Linking Words
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Furthermore
, travellers can expand their social network by making international friends. All these possibilities can develop Linking Words
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On the other hand
, it might bring more international Linking Words
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the number of tourists. Currently, states are looking forward to the solutions, restricting some popular avia companies, and recommending cheap Linking Words
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contributed to issues of overcrowding and over-tourism. The aviation industry and governments need to collaborate to address these negative impacts Linking Words
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