Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued that
music
creates a strong bond between diverse generations and customs. I strongly disagree with this
idea as new generations and other generations have different tastes regarding music
and also
different cultures
don't have the same values.
These days, the new generation prefers to listen to the latest types of music
and they don't have any interest in the 1960s and 1970s ones and find them old-fashioned which are the favorite
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favourite
songs
of their parents and older people. youngsters, usually enjoy listening to young pop stars' music
whose songs
are about love stories or heartbroken. Such
as Selena Gomez and Taylor Swift. By way of example, when families are on a car journey normally conflict due to
every member of the family want
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wanting
such
songs
that are not enjoyable for others.
In addition
, despite music
has rejuvenated all of us with a variety of ages and cultures
that said, it can't connect cultures
together. Cultures
do not have the same values and literature. So, they may consider some other cultures
' poets inadequate. For instance
, in the song Who Do You Love by the Maroon Five, the lyric contains the line 'You are moving differently when we are making life'. While
those from traditional cultures
may regard the lyrics as disgraceful, westerners find it lovely. Thus
, the songs
make them become disrespectful of each other's cultures
potentially.
In conclusion, I do not think traditions and ages can be liked by the music
industry. Because individuals have grown up with different attitudes and environments have influenced their thoughts. Moreover
, youths tend to keep up with the latest music
, unlike their parents.Submitted by kmibehnaz98 on
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Try to present a clearly structured argument that flows logically from one point to the next. While your introduction and conclusion are present, they could be strengthened by more explicitly acknowledging contrasting viewpoints and harmonizing your overall argument.
task achievement
Develop your ideas further and provide more in-depth analysis of how music may or may not bring people together. Be sure to fully address the topic throughout your essay. Your response should more directly and explicitly discuss the degree to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated in the prompt.