The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
give
data about the number of people who Change the verb form
gives
visit
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visited
a
various Correct article usage
apply
of
art Change preposition
apply
museums
in 2011. The units are measured by number of visitors
/millions
.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the louver
was up to the Change the spelling
louvre
peck
. Correct your spelling
peak
Moreover
, the Metropolitan ,
and the British Remove the comma
apply
museums
had same
pattern. it can observed that the lowest three galleries were the Change the article
the same
national museum
of Korea, the Correct your spelling
National Museum
museo
del Change the capitalization
Museo
prado
, Change the capitalization
Prado
Correct word choice
and state
state
Hermitage Russia.
Correct your spelling
the
According to
what is shown, the louver
was the Capitalize word
Louver
highest
Correct word choice
most
museums
that people visited at
9 Change preposition
with
visitors
/millions
. In addition
, The USA, and The UK museums
were nearly from each other at mostly 6 visitors
/millions
.
It is interesting to note that all the three latters
Correct your spelling
letters
museams
have the same pattern with Correct your spelling
museums
a
Correct article usage
apply
slightly
Change the word
slight
differnces
, to be more specific the Correct your spelling
differences
difference
national museum
of Korea reached 3.2 Correct your spelling
National Museum
visitors
/millions
, Fix the agreement mistake
million
while
the museo
del Change the capitalization
Museo
prado
achieved 3 Change the capitalization
Prado
visitors
/millions
, and Fix the agreement mistake
million
finally
State Hermitage Russia at 2,9 visitors
/millions
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