The diagram below illustrates how fossils were exposed beneath a cliff as a result of coastal erosion.

The diagram below illustrates how fossils were exposed beneath a cliff as a result of coastal erosion.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below illustrates how fossils were exposed beneath a cliff as a result of coastal erosion.
The diagram shows how to expose fossils beneath a
cliff
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consequence of coastal
erosion
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.
Overall
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, there are two stages in the process of exposing fossils under a
cliff
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causing coastal decrease waiting until low
tide
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, and digging the dangerous
erosion
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area of the
cliff
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. In the first stage of waiting until low
tide
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, we can see that when the
tide
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is high, it creates huge waves
that
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is
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as high as half of the
cliff
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height to crash into the
cliff
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to make an
erosion
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region of the
cliff
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.
This
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erosion
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zone is dangerous.
On the other hand
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, when the
tide
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is low, it reveals a sloping rocky flatform. In the second stage, when miners can go on sloping rocky flatforms on their feet, it is the right time for them to expose the dangerous zone of the
cliff
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.
Firstly
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, they dig a previous position of the
cliff
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face very carefully,
then
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, they continuously dig the second layer of the
cliff
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retreating more thoroughly before exposing fossils.

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