Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In the contemporary era, the majority of people are showing an upward tendency towards using home remedies without considering their doctors' advice.

While

many argue that

this

shift brings convenience to individuals, I vehemently consider it

as

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an

absolute

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negative development

due to

the reasons

this

essay

further

elaborates on. One major drawback of

this

phenomenon is the side effects

rising

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from

wrong

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medication. Being not sophistically educated in

this

field, they don't know what treatment suits them best.

Moreover

, there is the threat of exacerbating the condition if given

it

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the wrong remedy, ultimately jeopardizing their

overall

health.

In addition

, as their ailment worsens,

they'd

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experience frustration and a mental breakdown. Green tea,

for instance

,

recieved

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received

considerable fame among households for calming chest

pain

.

Although

it relieved the

pain

, users,

along with

intensified

pain

and exhaustion, recorded a subsequent

heartattack

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heart attack

heart-attack

.

Consequently

, they not only failed to address the

pain

but

also

brought about more mental and physical conditions.

In addition

, the negative implications of

this

notion

extends

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beyond exacerbating the diseases and imparts disadvantages by generating new infirmities which wouldn't have thrived if not used the wrong medication. By targeting the wrong features of a condition, patients trigger other diseases related to that organ or others;

therefore

, they'd do

permanant

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permanent

damage to their health. What's more, having to deal with more infirmities at a time, would worsen their mental well-being

further

, contributing to a reduction in their quality of

lives

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. To illustrate, Iranian people, who'd

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vitamin D without asking their doctors, experienced severe gut ailments caused by the accumulated amount of

vitamine

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vitamin

D years later. In conclusion,

although

home remedies are seemingly more accessible, they bring about detrimental

reperecussions

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repercussions

worth considering. In fact, the

exaccerbated

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exacerbated

pain

,

together with

the generation of other infirmities jeopardize individuals' physical and mental health conditions, ultimately lowering their quality of

lives

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