The diagram shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The diagram shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
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The diagrams illustrate the blueprints of the Central
Library
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in present times and how it looked two decades ago.
Overall
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, there are modern additions to the
library
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,
such
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as self-service machines and a computer
room
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, and the number of rooms remained the same. When one enters the
library
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, they will be greeted by the café on the right side of the entrance, which was previously a
room
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for an inquiry desk. Walking past the café, we can see self-service machines and an information desk, where we can ask for details about the
library
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.
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, on the far right of the
library
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building is the lecture
room
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, which replaced children’s books. On the left of the entrance is the computer
room
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, which was a place for reading 20 years ago. The largest
room
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in the
library
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is for storytelling and fictional books for children.
This
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is situated in the
left-side
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left-hand
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corner of the
library
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. Between
this
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room
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and the computer
room
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is a corridor where all reference books are kept.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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