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The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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This
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 table illustrates the proportion of expenditure on food/drinks/tobacco, clothing/footwear and
leisure
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/
education
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 in five countries in 2002.
Overall
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, all the given countries spent the most on food/drinks/tobacco
whereas
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 money spent on
leisure
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/
education
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 was the least. Analysing the table
further
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,
Turkey
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 spent the most on food/drinks/tobacco products at 32.14%.
This
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 was closely followed by Ireland with 28.91% spent on these
items
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.
While
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 Sweden and Italy expended almost half the amount of money when compared to
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turkey
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Turkey
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, Spain spent 18.80% on these
items
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. With regard to clothing/footwear, consumers from Italy spent 9% which is the highest among the other given countries. Ireland, Spain and
Turkey
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 spent approximately 3% less than Italy on clothing and footwear.At 5.40%, Sweden spent the least amount of money on these
items
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. Moving ahead, the highest proportion of funds were expended by
Turkey
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 on
leisure
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 and
education
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. Italy and Sweden invested about 3.20% on these
items
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.
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, Ireland and Spain only spent 2.21% and 1.98% on
leisure
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/
education
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 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words leisure, education, turkey, items with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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