Many major cities are facing a housing crisis as they cannot provide enough land for new buildings. Some local governments believe the problem could be solved by reassigning park land for residential development, because this land would be better used for housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the topic sentence suggests, a lot of major

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are confronting a severe housing problem without enough capacity to give space for novel buildings.

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some governments argue that

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can be solved by demolishing

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to compensate for the needs, I strongly disagree with

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idea because ruining the

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with natural landscapes will harm

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’s health and there are other options

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as urging exporting

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and companies outside of the city area.

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just making space by destroying the existing buildings and

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does not solve the fundamental problems; the major

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are too crowded for

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to live comfortably.

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, governments should pay attention to distributing

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burden to the

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, where they hold various problems because of the shortage of workforce.

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, in Japan, in the midst of COVID-19,

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were inevitably urged to work far from other

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and every meeting was switched to online, which enabled many

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to live in comfortable rural areas and

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have noticed its merits, now there are more

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who choose to live in the suburbs and

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.

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demolishing the natural

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will harbour many problems not only for the environment but

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for

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’s mental and physical health.

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,

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to the

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,

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seldom find a place

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as a playground, traffic for running or walking, and a park to feel relaxed in

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and destroying

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precious places makes it almost impossible for anyone to maintain their health.

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, in Tokyo in Japan, there are more individuals suffering from depression or other mental illnesses compared to those in the

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and some

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have completely recovered from the depression just by moving outside of the city area surrounded by a more cheerful atmosphere and more nature. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the idea of making space for living or business by ruining the existing parkland because it will do more harm than merit for local

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and governments should seek for redistribution of the workforce and residents outside of the major

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.