The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the visits made to a town's
website
during the first and second years of its establishment. Overall
it is immediately apparent that there were more people using the website
in the first year
than the following year
.
In the first year
, February had the highest recording at a little over 40,000 users
followed by October and June at 40,000 and approximately 39,000 respectively. Meanwhile, over 30,000 persons used the website
in January and September at
about 38,000 and 35,000 respectively. The same number of individuals visiting the Change preposition
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website
in August,
did so in December. Remove the comma
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By contrast
, nearly half the users
in August and December, used the website
in April at about 15,000 whereas
half of the users
in October visited the website
in June.
In the second year
, whilst January saw the most viewers at just more than 20,000, April which had the least users
had about a quarter the figure in January at 5,000. Although
July and October recorded 20,000 each, only half of these numbers used the website
in May, June and September. Also
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Also,
users
visited the website
at nearly 20,000 in February, November and December.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words website, year, users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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