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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. With a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter : Explain where you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you do not want this development

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to draw your kind attention to the plan for the extension of St. Alison Airport which can affect our society in numerous ways. I reside at House number 562, in the William Street Colony, located behind the airport. It is a densely populated area with over 800 houses covering the northwestern side of the airport. The landing and takeoff area is adjacent to our locality's wall, causing us to already experience signal jammers.
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, despite the limited number of flights, the noise from aircraft constantly leaves us mentally tired, and some children are even experiencing hearing issues. I request you to reconsider the plan, as it may be inadequate for us. It involves acquiring nearly two
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 of land and doubling the number of flights, which would put us in a difficult situation, facing the destruction of our homes.
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, it would be a great relief if you could explore alternative plans for its development. I look forward to hearing from you soon in
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 regard. Yours faithfully, Jacob Brown
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coherence cohesion
Incorporate transitional phrases to improve the flow between paragraphs.
task achievement
You could elaborate more on the specific adverse effects the expansion might have on the community members.
coherence cohesion
The letter is structured well with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
task achievement
The tone is polite and appropriate for addressing local authorities.
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