The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map depicts two locations that are possible to be built for a shopping mall in Brandfield City.
Overall
it can be seen that the first location will be constructed between of Housing Estate and the City Center and the second location is planned in the south of the Industrial Estate.
In terms of the first site for the next shopping mall is more strategic than others because it is surrounded by public access facilities such
as a main road, a river and a railway which leads more people to visit this
building either by private or mass transport.
Regarding the second site, the shopping mall is projected to be built on the edge of the city which is quite far from the people's housing estate. Moreover
, this
amenity is set a stand in a quite narrow area which is adjacent to the railway and main roadsSubmitted by sofinnovita on
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