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The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 report derives from the above line graph which enumerates the amount of air pollution in
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tonnes
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 in The United Kingdom
due to
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 three sources namely, families, transportation, and industries. As an initial overview, air pollution plummeted throughout the entire period with a small growth in 2002 and hit rock bottom in 2005, as it was around 7
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tonnes
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 in 1990 and became 3.3
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 in 2005. Notably, households and transport had the same emitted the same amount in 1990 which was 1
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tonnes
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;
however
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, households were the lowest source of polluting the air during the period,
while
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 it decreased and reached the nadir in 2005 with less than 500,000
tonnes
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.
Additionally
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, transportation hit a plateau which lasted the whole period except for an unnoticed dip in 1999.
Besides
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 these points, the industry field ranked first in the amount, as it was in charge of 5.6
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tonnes
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 in 1990.
On the other hand
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, it slumped significantly and reached 3
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 by the year 1996.
Next,
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it continued decreasing until it hit 2
million
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 by 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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