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The pie charts below show the different types of courses, which were followed by the students during the years of 1984, 1994 and 2004

The pie charts below show the different types of courses, which were followed by the students during the years of 1984, 1994 and 2004
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The pie chart compares the shares of four major
courses
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 studied by the students in three different years :1984 , 1994 and 2004 .
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Overall
,
it is clear that
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 by 2004 popularity of
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face to
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face
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courses
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 had ranked first ,and
while
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 that of mixed media ones increased dramatically , there was a corresponding drop in that of correspondence
courses
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.
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 , the figure for online
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 remained stable
although
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 they didn’t exist
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 the first year .
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courses
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 saw a slow drop from 67% in 1984 to 54% in 1994 and ended at 40% by the end of the period .
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, there was a negligible rise in mixed media ones from 13% to 35% .
In contrast
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 , a marginal drop was seen in the share of correspondence
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 from 20% to 10%,and
while
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 online
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 didn’t exist
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 the first year,
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 hit a plateau
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 20% during the period .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words courses, face with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 3 times.
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