You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter: explain why you need this time off give details of when you want this time off say who can do your work when you are away
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to request to take 2 months off from work due to
my sister's wedding which will be held in my country during the fall season.
I am the eldest son in my family , and I have accountability to manage my family expenses as well as
big events . My father is not able to take too much responsibility for my sister's wedding because they are suffering from heart problems . Thus
, I need to plan everything for my sister's wedding .
We planned to celebrate the wedding in October, so , I would like to take time off at the beginning of September in order to arrange guest lists and book the wedding place. I also
completed all important presentations that are coming in September .Thus
, it would be easy for you to present in front of other employers.
Also
, I already communicate all the important information to my assistant about upcoming projects ,so , he will assist you in my place and guide you with up-to-date information . I already plan
the schedule in advance for that period and will send you an email copy .If you have any questions please discuss them with me anytime.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal KaurWrong verb form
planned
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down longer sentences into shorter ones for better readability.
coherence cohesion
Try to ensure each paragraph covers a single idea more distinctly.
task achievement
Though your letter covers all the required information, adding more specific details about who can cover your duties can be beneficial.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a clear and polite tone which is very suitable for the context.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal and polite.
complete response
You have covered the necessary points about the reason for the leave, the timing, and the person who will cover your duties.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite