Aircraft have been increasingly used for transport fruit and vegetable to some country where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In
this
generation, we cannot imagine that we are running out of fresh ingredients
such
as carrots, strawberries and garlic every day. Due to
the development of transport
, it is really easy to get fresh ingredients
for everyone.
The number of usage transports such
as aeroplanes and ships for plants has been increasing gradually because people always require plants and fresh ingredients
instantly. Some economists say for some reason, this
phenomenon is good for everyone in the world. Firstly
, we do not have to worry about running out of fresh ingredients
by massive transport
services
for plants and ingredients
. Secondly
, the economic growth of other countries activates at the same time. According to
a survey, the economic growth of territories has been increasing across the world by outrageous imports and exports of fresh ingredients
. In addition
, it is helpful to other specific territories such
as Africa where is hard to grow specific fruits like strawberries or grapes.
Whereas
, some pessimists such
as environmental campaigners argue that the earth is getting sicker environmentally. According to
eminent geographic scholars, the depletion of the ozone layer is exacerbated by abusing transport
services
such
as aircraft and ships massively. In this
case, the more consumers buy fresh ingredients
the more merchants and providers are using transport
services
. And people are wasting natural resources like vegetables more and more.
In conclusion, there are pessimistic perspectives and optimistic perspectives about having an increase of using massive transport
services
. But in my opinion, this
issue is likely to be controversial continuously because there is a correlation between opportunities from transport
services
and difficulties from transport
services
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