The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram shows the process of creating electricity by a hydroelectric
power
station.
Overall
, the process starts with water
in the river and the final product is electricity. In addition
, its flow of water
is divided into two different stages which are day and night.
Firstly
, water
from the river flows into the high-level reservoir
which is blocked by the dam. At day, in the intake, it is opened so water
from the high-level reservoir
runs to reversible turbines and then
low-level reservoir
. Therefore
, it makes turbines spin. After that, the generator which is located in the power
station operates and produces electricity. Then
the product is transported to the national grid by power
lines. In contrast
, at night, the flow of water
is reversed. Water
from the low-level reservoir
is pumped through reversible turbines in the power
station and then
taken to the high-level reservoir
. In addition
, at that time, in the intake, it is closed.Submitted by duongntt.tld on
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