The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.

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chart

and pie

chart

gives

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information about

in

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the

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Turkey,

jean

's

sales

and projected

markest

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of

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predictions for two brands which are

mango

co.

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and Jack %Jones between next

year

and

and

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of

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the next

year

.

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, other brands will be overweight in terms of projection of jeans, as opposed to The

mango

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Mango Co

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co

.

company

will have outraced. At first

glance

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jean sale

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jeans sales

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of the Jack %jones

company

will be going up

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in jun with around 400.000

sales

to December just under 800.000

sales

of jeans

while

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the pie

chart

that

company

is going to make up

of

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30

%30 of the total

jean's

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jeans

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project in the next part of the

year

.

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hand

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The

Mango

company

will have

experianced

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experienced

drastic

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increment

beacuse

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because

it will

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slightly above 100.000 jeans in June after that The

company

will reach almost 600.000 amount of

jean's

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jeans

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sales

however

when it comes to forecasting of pie

chart

The

mango

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co

, is going to

reducing

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so it's

expeditcitons

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expeditions

expedition

will account of the total by %20

in

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the end of next

year

.

Also

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we can say that other brands will be dominating

jean's

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Jean's

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projected in the next years

compare

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compared

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to

Mango

co

and Jack & jones.