You accidentally left an item of clothing at your friend’s house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - describe the item of clothing - explain where you left it - say what you would like your friend to do with the item of clothing

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Dear Rohit, I’m just writing to let you know that I left my black

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at your house. The appearance of

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shirt

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is casual with a black base and white stripes at the bottom and on the sides. You might remember, we were both together at the Infinity Mall with our school friends when I bought it

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year during the

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. I left it in your room somewhere, but I am not sure about the exact location. When I was packing my stuff, I made sure that all my items were with me, but I suppose the

shirt

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was left hidden somewhere. As you know

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this

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shirt

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is special to me, it’s my lucky

shirt

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so if you find it, just let me know and keep it with you, so that I may come to your house and pick it up. Waiting for your response, All the best, Sakshi

sakshisyalSun Nov 03 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each idea is clearly separated into its own paragraph to enhance clarity.

task achievement

The letter maintains a friendly and appropriate tone throughout, which is suitable for the context.

coherence cohesion

The letter contains a clear and logical structure with a proper greeting and closing.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

152 words

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You accidentally left an item of clothing at your friend’s house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - describe the item of clothing - explain where you left it - say what you would like your friend to do with the item of clothing

In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

The influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Some people think that people commit crime because of poverty and social problems, while others think it is because of their bad nature. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now.