The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe, by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe,

by season.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons

where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
number
of
sales
of 5 selected items at a cafe in
winter
and
summer
.
Overall
, the cafe had a large
number
of
sales
in
winter
for hot
coffee
and soup,
while
during
summer
, iced
coffee
and ice cream had a huge demand.
However
, the salad had the same
number
of
sales
during each season. In the
winter
, hot
coffee
had a total of approximately 60 servings, which was twice the
number
served during
summer
( 30 served).
Moreover
, a similar figure was seen for soup where the
number
of
sales
during
winter
was twice the
number
sold during
summer
( 50 and around 25 respectively). In terms of iced
coffee
, the
sales
in
summer
were exactly 40, but almost none was served during
winter
.
Although
the
number
of servings
for
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of
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ice cream was higher during
summer
, around 30 served, the
sales
during
winter
had reached a significant level at almost 25 servings.
However
, the salad was served approximately 25 served in both seasons.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, sales, winter, summer, coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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