You are going to organise a family party next week at your home. You want to invite a friend to this party. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to attend the party. In your letter, explain why you are organising the party describe what you are planning to do say why you want your friend to come to the party Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Jay, I am writing

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letter to invite you to attend the

party

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that I am going to organise at my home next week. Because I am going to get married next month, I organising a bachelor

party

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for our friend's group and

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we did not meet for the

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long time, so it is the best time to meet and enjoy the

party

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. I have decided on my farmhouse as a venue for the

party

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which is in the suburban area of the city where nobody can get disturbed by our enjoyment and loud music.

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, I will arrange some drinks and cards to play some games. I would like to welcome you to

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party

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because of our old friendship and nobody can get a chill without your funny jocks and dance. Please come to

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party

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as soon as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Ankit

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Some sentences are slightly awkward. Make sure to proofread to avoid minor errors and improve clarity.

coherence cohesion

The letter is well-structured and clearly conveys the purpose.

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The writing tone is suitable and friendly, fitting the context of inviting a close friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

154 words

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