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Translation software are now accessible, people still thinks learning a language can be advantageous.

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With the accessibility to various
translation
software
 at
this
 point of technological development in our society, learning a
language
 might be set aside as a time-wasting job to get started with, unlike how
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 it was years ago. People tend to rely on
translation
 applications
instead
 of spending effort and time actually studying the
language
, using multiple excuses to avoid taking part in linguistic classes or even
too
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 ignorant to enhance those skills on their own. No matter how advanced technology gets, learning a
language
 still could be advantageous for us in different fields. Let’s discuss some of the aspects that gained
translation
software
this
 much
of
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attention nowadays.
Language
 barrier is the main factor of the increasing amount of users, trips to foreign countries require tourists to express their wants and needs with the locals. And just by pulling out your phone, typing sentences and letting it do its business, you can easily communicate with anyone right on site. Equipped with almost every
language
 dominantly used in many regions of the world,
translation
software
 has shown its full potential and convenience through
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. Taking the role of a dictionary,
this
 immaculate innovation is now preferred over any traditional methods.
On the other hand
, the accuracy and cadence
in
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languages
 have to be learned
by
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 real human contacts and through experiences. Slangs are known to appear in every single
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, which are
also
 things that
translation
software
 couldn’t afford. The progress of studying new
languages
 provides connections between the
languages
,
ability
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the ability
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 to speak without stuttering and
development
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 of linguistics skills.
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 ourselves with many
language
 packs is an
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 amazing way to achieve communication goals. In denouement, learning something new by ourselves
is
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 proved to be more effective and long-lasting. Even though
translation
software
are
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 quick and accessible,
they
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 still can’t replace our role in society. As long as the world continues to have different races and regions, we as human beings are dutied to learn and make connections using our own ability
instead
 of relying on technology. The advantages of learning
languages
 definitely
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 the advantages of
translation
 platforms, and it will forever be like that in the future.
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