All students ought to study art and music in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is generally accepted that
art
and music
have existed for thousands of years and they have been used for many different purposes. However
, some people
see it as a meaningless subject to study, and this
has led to an argument about whether they should be taught in schools or not. In my opinion, I would agree that we need to learn them to enhance our soft skills for some reasons which are set out below.
First,
It is generally accepted that it would take years of practice for someone to master art
or music
and most people
give up on their first year. Therefore
, some people
find them hard to comprehend and they don’t understand the meaning behind it. However
, I agree with most people
that both aspects are one of the most beautiful ways for someone to express their feelings. It has also
been scientifically proven that art
and music
give pleasure to most people
and it relieves stress. For instance
, many musicians write songs to express their emotions and their fans enjoy listening to them.
Second,
as we all know, there are many types of art
and music
. Most people
have a hard time understanding and find interest in different types of them. To give an example, most people
in the current generation only listen to pop music
. In contrast
, I would say that art
and music
are very useful because most cultures have their own kind of music
to appreciate their ancestors and keep the tradition alive through generations. For example
, there are hundreds of tribes in Indonesia and every single one of them has a distinct type of art
and music
.
In conclusion, even though art
and music
can be hard to learn, they have many different benefits to the world, including preserving culture and appreciation of both subjects.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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