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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate how are about
haradous
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hazardous
 waste products in three governments. It is clearly seen that
three
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the three
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 countries cope with dangerous
wastes
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waste
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 in different ways.
However
, Sweden and the United Kingdom mostly use
Underground
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the Underground
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 way. The Republic of Korea uses recycling for harmful products. The
Republuc
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Republic
 of Korea and Sweden have three types concerning
if
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apply
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relating to unsafe wastes. In the Republic of
Koeea
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Korea
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,
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there are recycling 69 %, incineration 9 % and underground 22%. In Sweden there are
much
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many
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 more
difference
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differences
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 between
numbers
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the numbers
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 of percentage estimates: underground 55%, recycling 25%, incineration 20% The most
variety
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methodsof
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methods of
method of
 dealing with treacherous wastes have the
Unired
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United
 Kingdom. The vast majority of usage is Underground. The least popular is incineration. Other ways are chemical treatment, which takes 8% and dumping at 
is
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 8% too
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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