You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr. Steve,
I am writing you
this
letter to inform you that I can not finish my six-month driving course
because I got a full-time job that will be starting next week in Dubai.
As you might be aware, I have been doing project management training ship in MNC Company. Though this
will be completed this
week, the company wants me to shift and work in another location where the main headquarters operates the company.
I would like to expand my circumstances which led me to make a quick decision to leave the course
which was important for my driver's license but now I can not finish this
course
. It is my dream job as a project manager and lead a team and manage staff for an innovation project.
At this
point, I am in dilemma to choose a full-time job or a short time course
so regarding this
I would like your suggestion.
looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mike SakenSubmitted by patelhardik2199 on
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coherence cohesion
The letter should have a clear introduction, development, and conclusion, which are currently not well-delineated. Ensure each paragraph carries a single idea for better structure.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are informal. Use 'Dear [Teacher's full name]' for greeting and 'Yours faithfully' for closing when you know the teacher's name, which makes it more formal and suitable for IELTS.
task achievement
While the situation is described, the explanation is not fully clear and specific actions you would like to take are not mentioned. Be more explicit in explaining why you cannot continue and suggest a clear course of action, such as deferring the course or seeking alternative arrangements.
task achievement
The writing tone of the letter is casual, using words like 'Mike' instead of 'Michael' or full name which is informal. Ensure that the letter maintains a formal tone throughout, as is expected in a formal situation.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite