The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above illustrates in-depth information about different metro systems in main cities across the globe.
Overall
, we can see that the year each of them was completed varies, most of them were completed in the 1900s while
Los Angeles finished in 2001 and London is the oldest it finished in 1863 as well as
Paris which finished in 1890. As for the total length
the longest is London with 1100 KM
then
Paris and the others are in the 100s and 10s KMs, on the other hand
, the city that has the most carrying capacity
is Tokyo with 1434 million
.
Furthermore
, even though London is longest
in Correct article usage
the longest
length
but
it is not the highest in carrying Correct word choice
apply
capacity
, it comes in third with 548 million
. Tokyo with only a length
of 149 KM
has the highest carrying capactiy
of 1434 Correct your spelling
capacity
million
while
also
Paris comes in second with 850 million
and a length
of 594 KM
. In contrast
, the shortest in length
and lowest in carrying capacity
is Kyoto with only 11 KM
and 11 million
carrying capacity
. In comparison, Los Angles
is the second shortest but still has a Correct your spelling
Angeles
relativily
high carrying Correct your spelling
relatively
capacity
of 90 million
. Finally
, Washington DC is fourth in the total length
of 149 KM
and a
low carrying Add a missing verb
has a
capacity
of only 70 million
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