The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides statistics on several major metro (MRT) systems around the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above illustrates in-depth information about different metro systems in main cities across the globe.
Overall
, we can see that the year each of them was completed varies, most of them were completed in the 1900s
while
Los Angeles finished in 2001 and London is the oldest it finished in 1863
as well as
Paris which finished in 1890. As for the total
length
the longest is London with 1100
KM
then
Paris and the others are in the 100s and 10s KMs,
on the other hand
, the city that has the most carrying
capacity
is Tokyo with 1434
million
.
Furthermore
, even though London is
longest
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in
length
but
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it is not the highest in carrying
capacity
, it comes in third with 548
million
. Tokyo with only a
length
of 149
KM
has the highest carrying
capactiy
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capacity
of 1434
million
while
also
Paris comes in second with 850
million
and a
length
of 594
KM
.
In contrast
, the shortest in
length
and lowest in carrying
capacity
is Kyoto with only 11
KM
and 11
million
carrying
capacity
. In comparison, Los
Angles
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Angeles
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is the second shortest but still has a
relativily
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relatively
high carrying
capacity
of 90
million
.
Finally
, Washington DC is fourth in the total
length
of 149
KM
and
a
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has a
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low carrying
capacity
of only 70
million
.
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